Uncross the Starsby Janell Rhiannon
Self-published
Ebook (received from author, thank you!)
YA, contemporary, romance
Fiona Lavender is the new girl at school. She has a chip on her shoulder and a penchant for poetry. Dario Martinez is the star quarterback, and the most unattainable guy on campus. Their stars cross when they are paired to study Romeo and Juliet for a senior English project. Their attraction is fragile and undeniable. But, Dario is afraid of what love will do; and Fiona is waiting for love to claim her.
Will they uncross the stars and find the love they both need to heal their pasts?
Uncross the Stars had potential. It sounded really intriguing and I hoped there to be epic romance, and I was so excited when the author offered me a chance to read and review it. However, the story and the characters felt flat and quite one dimensional. I think it's mostly because the story is so short so everything was kind of superficial and I didn't have time to get attached to characters or enjoy the plot twists. Some blame goes to the structure of the story, because it ruined any mystery it might tried to attempt. And honestly, I felt for Ryan so much because of the beginning and his point of view and it took me a lot of time to actual see him as the villain of story (and he was quite unlovable because how he treated other persons). I mean, I felt for Ryan so much at the beginning and it made me dislike Dario, which wasn't good for the story, especially since in the end Ryan didn't have redeemable qualities.
Fiona and Dario, well, they didn't have the epic romance I hoped for. I didn't feel any spark between them, more like just high school sweethearts who had all the misunderstandings, drama and vowing for forever love. I really wanted to like both of them together and apart but I couldn't and then the book ended. Uncross the Stars were all about romance and betrayal but when the romance didn't made my heart skip a beat, the whole story felt kind of flat and I couldn't make myself to care what happened to the characters.
It wasn't all bad. I liked the synopsis and Rhiannon's writing style, and the story has potential. It just should have been longer, to take more time to scrutinize the character's feelings and their reactions of what happened, and the structure should have been different. Maybe stick to Fiona and Dario's point of view because then there would have been more mystery around who orchasrated the whole betrayal. I kind of like that we got Ryan's and Meagan's perspective but it did ruin any mystery and mostly made Dario seem totally blind. And yeah, everyone had daddy issues. I'm not kidding, because Fiona, Dario, Meagan and Ryan all had daddy issues. I mean, what? I could get two of them to have daddy issues but it seems unbelievable that all the main characters had same kind of issues with their absent fathers, and it shaped all of them.
Uncross the Stars has potential but it doesn't live up to it. While the writing style and idea behind the story was enjoyable, the execution didn't work out, at least not for me. However, if you enjoy high school romance stories with some issues and lots of drama, then Uncross the Stars might be for you. I must say, I do love the cover! It's gorgeous.
2 of 5 stars.






































