Serpent on a Crossby Wendy C. Garfinkle
Published by Booktrope
Ebook (received from publisher, thank you!)
YA, fantasy
Dennah Dubrovnika is a formidable hunter and talented healer. However, she cannot control her own powers, which have suddenly reawakened in the aftermath of her mother's violent capture by a powerful warlord who destroyed their village in his wake. As she races to free her mother, Dennah is accompanied by Jeth, the man she loves. But she's increasingly, inexorably drawn to the mysterious Skallon, who is allied with her greatest enemy.
Will Dennah be able to gain a measure of control over her magic or will she lose everything and everyone she loves to its raging inferno?
Serpent on a Cross is a novel of Jewish fantasy and adventure in Medieval Eastern Europe.
When I was offered Serpent on a Cross for review, I was excited. Fantasy set in Medieval Eastern Europe? I'm history student as some may know and Middle Age is my favourite time period. I was a little set back by the aspect of religion but I thought to give the book a chance - I was so curious what kind of fantasy story it would be. However, it didn't meet any of my expectations and sadly it didn't live up it's potential.
Serpent on a Cross is what it promises to be but not quite. It's Jewish fantasy with capital letters because the whole point of the story seems to be displaying the religion. While it's not a bad thing, it creates a certain air for the book and as I'm not that much into religiously themed books, I grew to be hesitant when I started to read this. So many phrases and words were Yiddish and I had hard time to guess their meaning. Apparently, there's a vocabularly at the end of the story so I recommend to read it first if you're not familiar with Yiddish. However, this was something I was able to overcome quite quickly as the setting intrigued me so much. Sadly the world building was a little shaky, it was more of a given than explained which I yearned for. I can imagine that for a person who isn't familiar with Medieval customs (or Jewish customs) this story might be hard to read. A little more focus on actual world building would have done miracles to the story even though it certainly wasn't bad in the first place, just a little lacking.
There was lots of characters but most of them lacked depth so I was confused who was who. It took a good while to remember who was who and who did what and most importantly, what was their relation to Dennah. However, it became easier when Dennah and a little group took off to their request - then there was good number of people and no confusion who did what. Although, descriping the characters a little more in the beginning would have done miracles with identifying the specific characters. There was lots of backround and building for the villain of the story but without spoiling anything, eventually the villain wasn't anything that was described during the story. However, there was one character I found really interesting and his point of views were captivating. That's Skallon, one of the story's bad guys, kind of. In top of everything there was love triangle. Well, it didn't consume the story because the romance was left quite alone. There was lots of thinking and talking about love and lust but very little happened.
Serpent on a Cross wasn't badly written, on the contrary, but the story and characters lacked a lot. With a little more intense world-building and adding depth to characters the book would have been so much better. Now it felt like five hundred page story was forced to fit in two and half hundred pages and it ate a lot from the actual story. So while the story wasn't bad, I was unable to connect with the characters and grew a little bored while reading it because of the uninterest towards the characters. That's why I couldn't get into the story and my reading experience suffered because of that. However, if you want to read something different, Serpent on a Cross is good enough and maybe you'll be able to connect with the characters.
2 of 5 stars.
I had no intentions to bad mouth the book or the author because even though I was unable to enjoy it fully, it wasn't bad per say. This is my honest opinion and I hope I didn't hurt anyone's feelings.
Serpent on a Cross wasn't badly written, on the contrary, but the story and characters lacked a lot. With a little more intense world-building and adding depth to characters the book would have been so much better. Now it felt like five hundred page story was forced to fit in two and half hundred pages and it ate a lot from the actual story. So while the story wasn't bad, I was unable to connect with the characters and grew a little bored while reading it because of the uninterest towards the characters. That's why I couldn't get into the story and my reading experience suffered because of that. However, if you want to read something different, Serpent on a Cross is good enough and maybe you'll be able to connect with the characters.
2 of 5 stars.
I had no intentions to bad mouth the book or the author because even though I was unable to enjoy it fully, it wasn't bad per say. This is my honest opinion and I hope I didn't hurt anyone's feelings.
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